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Posted on January 13, 2011 at 4:28 AM
I'm stopping
not going
not breathing
too hard.
I hear
your words
with eyes
on a card.
Have a
good day
it's been
so real.
Can't think.
Can't breathe.
Can't move.
Can't feel.

Categories: Poetry & Lyric, Robin Michelle

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2 Comments

Reply Admin Frank
10:41 AM on January 14, 2011 
Well..... in the words of Pearl Jam, "Just breathe."

Nifty, short, punchy piece. Good job.
Reply Robin Michelle
2:45 PM on January 14, 2011 
Admin Frank says...
Well..... in the words of Pearl Jam, "Just breathe."

Nifty, short, punchy piece. Good job.


Thanks Frank,
I was actually putting myself in someone elses shoes at this moment. It works sometimes if no drama is going on with me. lol