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I am a Failure
| Posted on September 3, 2010 at 2:51 PM |
To you
My writing has no import,
My reading no class.
You make all my words
Seem like carcasses of thoughts,
My thoughts
Irrational whims.
Nothing I do or say
Is enough to win your respect,
You would have me love you,
You tell me
you love me too.
Your apathy to my desires
Sometimes makes me wonder,
Do you love me,
Or the way
I love you?
Categories: Poetry & Lyric, Rabab Khan
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2 Comments
Wow! Quite a statement in contrast to your last. The style is very direct. I like the image of "carcasses" of thoughts. I wonder if you could search to find an appropriate image or two that is equally powerful to insert into each section. Remember...balance. Good job!
Enjoyed, liked the last verse best.
Bold write. the best kind.
J
Bold write. the best kind.
J
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