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Thirty Words
| Posted on October 21, 2010 at 11:42 AM |
Author’s Note: Interesting challenge. Thirty words, no more no less.
“I dare you,” I say.
He stoops low, runs forward and jumps. The lake drinks him and burps.
“William!” I scream, but the water does not puke him back up.
Categories: Short Story, C.M. Marcum
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n.o.r.m.e.a.l. See, I can't even write the word. whaha!
ooh I like this one...its so full of action for 30 words. Very nicely done.
Thanks EM. In 30 words there isn't much time for anything except ACTION.
Fascinating, and I cannot for the life of me do these short pieces.
Great imagery and use of metaphor.
Great imagery and use of metaphor.
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